£100 MEGASAGA COMPETITION SHORT LIST WITHIN AN HOUR!
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The SHORTLIST OF 5 of the best stories will be published here on the 16th April! CORRECTION: TODAY’S THE DAY!!!!! THE SHORTLIST WILL BE UP WITHIN AN HOUR…WAITING FOR ONE MORE VOTE….

SCROLL TO COMMENTS BELOW TO SEE THE STORIES FROM WHICH THE WINNER WILL BE CHOSEN AT THE END OF APRIL.

The stories are in no particular order, so no clues there. Please feel free to make comments, pick your favourite, argue with the judges.

Corny to say it, but my goodness there is some great talent out there! If YOUR story wasn’t chosen, it wasn’t because it was no good I promise. The entries were all of a high standard.

The only thing that upset me was when a story with title wasn’t exactly 100 words – however good it was, it couldn’t be awarded the £100 prize if it didn’t conform to this rule.

What is a MegaSaga?

A MegaSaga is a Short Story. Big Deal. No, Small Deal because the story has to be EXACTLY 100 words – including the title. (A mini Saga is 50 words. But this is MEGA!)

The story has to be engaging, astonishing, maybe shocking. Or at least wildly hilarious – without itself being a mere joke. It must be in English, entirely original and (preferably) not graphically sexual.

The FIRST competition is FREE TO ENTER

CAN YOU WRITE A STORY IN 100 WORDS?

See the examples on my website. I’ll bet you can do better! I’ll bet £100!

RULES

Stories must be emailed to jonelkon3@gmail.com with the subject MegaSaga Competition Entry. Shortlisted authors will be informed by 1st April.

the longlisted stories are in the “Comments Section” below. The comments each receives will help determine the final winner, but will not be the sole deciding factor! After all, we can all muster a like or (maybe) 20,000 likes. The SHORTLIST will be here on 15th April, and my panel of  readers will make the final decision by April 30th. The winning story will appear on this website, with a profile of the author and plaudits galore. And the £100 will be on its way to the winner.

 

Comments

  • Let me get this right: how can you have beginning, middle and end in 100 words? Does it have to be a “story” or just some descriptive writing with a punchline?

    • Good question Grigor! (As usual). Well, that’s the challenge! Please look at the examples on the website. Although a little birdie tells me the judges are loving some of the writing which is purely descriptive. We have received a large volume of entries, most of which are brilliant. The judges will decide.

  • THE SHORTLIST!
    Here are the stories from which THE WINNER will be chosen!

    Her Red Tears

    First she pared back his eyelids, so that she could see into his soul. Then gently, with her talon, she made a long, clean incision across the ruins of his chest. I love you, she said. Reaching in, she removed the heart almost in one go, blood bubbling up so that it spattered her arms and her mouth. You died for me, she said, and swallowed his flesh. Then, delicately, she moved her attention to his crotch and gorged herself on his delicious parts. You were made to be enjoyed, she said. Then, weeping, she flew away.

    Brian G
    100

    Made in Heaven

    Perhaps Mildred thought that if she waited long enough, Mr Perfect would break down her bedroom door and sweep her off to sunny Bali. This could be the reason she never left her room, and spent her life yelling to Ma for food. Ever since abusive Adrian left her ten years ago, there was only Ma, and food. When Mildred reached twenty-five stone, Ma had had enough. Desperate to escape her impossible daughter, she burned the house down and no fireman who broke down her door could even lift Mildred out of the bed to save her.

    Khalid
    100
    Once Upon

    Jemima, Roland would never forget. She had let him just the once. Ever since that bizarre evening – they were both drunk, after all – they had avoided each-other as much as you can in an open-plan office. There was an unspoken mutual agreement to leave work at different times, to avoid embarrassing moments in the lift. Lunch breaks were taken in two competing coffee houses. And so, that 7/7, when there was no way home other than sharing a cab, he asked why. She answered, “You had better get a test. I have HIV”. “So do I”, he said.

    Grigor
    100

    It is past 2am and I have failed to convince my eyelids to close. No point trying to sleep now. So I dressed, and started exploring the unknown town.

    On the sidewalk, a dog. A Spaniel, no collar. He was shivering with cold and hunger, whimpering with the pain of a broken leg. I embraced him, comforted him and gently snapped his neck. He died warm and loved. I left him in a bin.

    I was tired now. Now I could sleep too.

    I returned to my hotel room and read the script one last time. I am ready now.
    Zara
    100
    Echoes of colour

    Dusk had settled in him, in his bones and his soul, the painted sky flooded from his beautiful mind, darkness settling in, clouding his vision. So I loved him vivaciously and painted my own canvas, with the colours of his soul, hoping he would see just how beautiful he was and learn to love again. It wasn’t easy, with my own tattered heart, sometimes my sky faded too but there was one thing that brought us back, the love we both held for the night, the moon, the stars. It was there, that our Cosmic love bloomed.

    Lorna Malan
    100

    The Window Smasher

    I knew I was in love from the moment he helped me to smash the window. I had locked my keys inside and in my desperation had approached the first man I came across in the street. I remember his look of determination and concern but in the light of the street lamp, he looked angelic. Once inside, despite my second thoughts I made him coffee and his hand brushed mine. I snatched it away and told him to get out. Now, thirty years later, I marvel at his face. It is still beautiful, even in death.

    Sukhi
    100

    South African Story

    This country, my home. A place risen from the ashes, a Phoenix in its own right. Pity we don’t have those flames cause we could use the light. The humor of it all is the people shouting Eskom must fall. The one service provider of electricity for all. Back to the dark ages we will be plunged, bathing in cold water with a sodden sponge. The people they shout, dance and pout. Violence erupts from a government corrupt and still we have no lights. Our nation born free, pity in the dark that’s something we cannot see.

    Tracy Peek
    100

    Son
    From the gate he could see the windows were open. The radio was playing. He breathed deeply and opened the lock, swung it open. Ran down the driveway. The front door was locked. “Mom,” he screamed. “Mama!” Again, “Mommy?“ The back door was open. His heart, his mind exploding. There she was. Lying on the linoleum kitchen floor. Eyes open. Gone. She had always said, “Son, when you find a departed Soul and their body’s eyes are open, lightly touch them, ease them.” He wept and easing the eyes closed he said, “Light may your journey be my Mommy.”
    Renos Spanoudis
    100

    The Man who Hated the word Nice

    “How do you like my dress?” she asked. “Do you think it looks nice?”
    He was in a bad mood, and didn’t want to deal with her trivial questions.
    “Must you say ‘nice’ all the time? Can’t you use another word, like pretty, attractive, or even fashionable?”
    She was a bit upset; she had carefully chosen the dress, and as it was on sale, it wasn’t expensive. She thought the dress looked good on her, and showed off her neat figure.
    “I’m sorry. But do you like the dress?”
    “Yes. It’s quite nice.”

    Helen Stevens
    100

    Nightmare

    Diabolical darkness fills the air. A murder of crows spiralling in the
    air, eagerly waiting. In the distance, I feel the presence of evil. The air
    started to reek of death. I want to turn and flee but my body objects.
    Drawing near, I can see the demonic black stallion. Body full of unending
    bleeding scars. Bloodred eyes staring into my soul, draining the life out
    of me. I break free and flee, my heart racing.

    Tripped over my own feet.

    Suddenly …

    Everything is gone.

    Eternally plummeting.

    Breathless.

    I jump up.

    Awoken with anxiety.

    Fetching a deep sigh.

    J Vox Woefski
    100

    ALAS and Alack! Lovely stories or short pieces which, as well written as they are, have been rejected only because they are not EXACTLY 100 words! Cruel. But those are the rules,

    What Counts?

    Her key, Gaia misplaced one morning. Events fortnightly left her life-bringer unconscious, yeasty-scented and beaten.

    “Punctuality counts, my girl” then left for work. Unbeknownst to Gaia, her own ‘prince charming’- “papa”- a masked villain.

    “Good day Charlie,” Gaia routinely left the doorman with. Her key had he salvaged, but Gaia was late.

    On forth the day rolled. Five minutes before Gaia returned home, with the key rightfully now returned in hand- had she saved her mother’s life.
    Angelically, the carpet only burnt. Finally; ‘prince charming’ was apprehended.

    “Remember.” Says Charlie.
    “Honesty counts,” Now replies Gaia.

    -Keena Strachan

    97

    ESKOMPLICATED

    And as I light the candle to another night of darkness I wonder to myself..”IS THIS REALLY SO COMPLICATED LIVING WITH STAGE ONE THEN STAGE TWO AND LETS JUST SKIP TO STAGE FOUR unsure where STAGE THREE went to during this whole light of loadshedding..gone are the days of lightening hitting the transformer and lights out or we just had the simple power failure and family bonding was the flavour of the night..its now stages that has everyone in a fit of frenzy running around waiting for the next stage of Eskomplicated..Welcome to my world

    By
    Adele Jones
    96

    Widow’s Peek

    The winter sky is a widow’s sky, bedarkened and weeping. I began to hammer on, taking each bend like a child playing a video game, as the giant drops hit my windshield, sounding like the buzzing of angry bees.
    I picture her waiting for me. Just a few more miles, I say to myself , as I take a sharp turn. Then, BOOM! It was all over. This widow sky cursed my wife to be a widow.
    The darkness took over my mind and body… Goodbye My Love!
    I was startlingly awoken by my dogs barking.

    It was all a dream!
    Pavlova Maharaj
    103

    PRANESH
    Once in your life, you meet a soul so precious that you start believing in good hearts again. Such a soul was HE that he loved without inhibition and was himself, owing no explanation to the world. A rare, beautiful human being that when in his presence I only felt peace and joy .I know that in this lifetime I’ll never come close to a selfless being like this again or anyone who could love or move my spirit the way he did. RIP my awesome best friend in the universe, my voice of reason, my high counsel…
    99

    Chantel Naidu

  • Frankly, while mine is clearly the best, Her Red Tears is a ripping tale. But my goodness, “Son” is the winner for me. Unless, of course, I am. Amazing tales. But didn’t you say “beginning middle and end?”

    • True, but when it’s REALLY good description, Judges seemed to think it deserved inclusion on the Long List. I won’t tell you my favourite

  • So happy my story made it! (Widows Peak), however unfortunely my name was not mentioned . Thank you Jon Elkon and team so much for this opportunity. Please feel free to comment on my story (good or bad reviews), i would love to find ways to improve my writing

    • Wow wow wow what a great short story I was so intrigued by ur short story u will make a great author brilliant keep up the great work #widowspeak

  • All the best to those brilliant writers shortlisted and ‘thumbs up’ to those that made the long list with me,with words more or less.This is a first for me,learning as I go along,thoroughly enjoying it.Thanks Jon for all your guidance.

  • Thank you for choosing my story.
    I must admit it was a good challenge .
    All the stories that got posted in the comment is good.

    @Tracy Peek
    @Adele Jones
    I like the idea of writing about load shedding . I never thought of that .

    @Adele Jones
    I like the name it is quite funny.

    @Jon Elkon
    Thank you for this wonderful opportunity .
    It was a good experience and challenge to participate in the challenge .

  • My pleasure! I love to encourage new writers. Once the winner is chosen at the end of the month, I will make comments on the stories here, in the hope that you writers will find that helpful. We’re ALL learning all the time!

  • If I had to choose 3 favorites it will be :

    1. Echoes of colour by Lorna Malan
    I like the descriptions Lorna used to describe the emotions .

    2. The Man who Hated the word Nice By Helen Stevens
    It made me laugh inside in the end when the man who hated the word, “nice” , used the
    word himself . There is people that unknowingly does the things they hate.

    3. South African Story by Tracy Peek
    I like the description used , I’m from South Africa myself and know what the writer is
    referring to .

    That will be the my 3 favourites , I believe not to choose your own work when you have to chose a favourite for a competition.

  • Thank you for your nominations. All 3 are strong contenders, as are you. I think about 70% of the entries are by South Africans, which pleases me very much!

  • Dearest Jon,

    Thank you for this wonderful opportunity. I am so humbled to have my story here amongst other brilliant writers!

    My personal favorites were;

    1. I see no title but it was written by @Zara, although it shocks you at first, it is very thought provoking and in some brilliant way, strikes emotions!
    2. Nightmare. It was a pleasure reading this, I felt the suspense in each sentence.
    3. Once upon. It’s simply one of those stories that gets you every time…an ending like no other.

    Good luck to everyone x

  • It is such a privilege to read these..such great talent…and what an honour to see mine here as well..my two favourites I would definitely go with would be
    Echoes of Colour and the South African Story
    Good luck to all of you and remember we’re all winners!!

  • You are indeed all winners! But only one will walk off with the big prize at the end of the month. So do share this with friends, get them to read the entries, select their favourites and comment. While the judges will make their own minds up, (genuine) comments will be taken into consideration.

  • I am very impressed with the imagery used.it is unique and intriguing .#widows peak .if i had to choose the top 3 ..it would be Widows peak …excomplicated …her red tears .thank you

  • My favourite is Widows Peek by Pavlova Maharaj
    The theme is unusual and had my heart racing till the end…excellent choice Pavlova.

  • Congratulations Pavlova Maharaj 103🙌😍
    I found your story to be intriguing.
    The twist at the end was amazing and I didn’t see that coming .

  • Pavlova Maharaj
    103 congratulations🙌😍
    Wow, what a great achievement. I really enjoyed your story and I love suspense. It was really intriguing from start to end. 👍

  • My 1st choice is widows peek by Pavlova Maharaj. Great story and I absolutely love the use of imagery . Didn’t expect that ending as well. Excellent work Pavlova

  • My 1st choice is widows peek by Pavlova Maharaj. Great story and I absolutely love the use of imagery . Didn’t expect that ending as well. Excellent work Pavlova

  • I have to say Lorna Malan..
    Enjoy her use of words..Painting pictures with words is a art that few can master.
    Lorna Malan is a future Master to be followed closely.

  • Widow’s peak by Pavlova Maharaj had me sitting at the edge of my seat. Love the suspense. Great use if imagery.

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